It's very good. I think the verses are all very good, especially the first verse, and I think you did a good job not being cheesy lyrically, like I think a lot of the other christian remixes of songs in general can be. But I also have a little bit of criticism; I think that the chorus could be better if you shortened the word "clique"; it's drawn out a bit too much. And when you say miss, the "s" can be a bit over pronounced. But in general I thought it was well done!
Da-vid - Clique | Remix,